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SPSFC Reading — First Taste Mini Reviews

I have had the pleasure of being a judge for the SPSFC this year, and it’s been a very cool experience with lots of learning for me, too. I’ve had books in the SPFBO and BBNYA as a contestant before and I help organize the Indie Ink Awards, but I’ve never actually judged in a contest. Our team lead and my fellow judges have been super fun, and it turns out it’s not all that dissimilar to reading slush piles for anthologies or small presses.

Be sure to check out the Team Updates Page for more news! Also, Dave does a great job of explaining the process we used (along with Athena’s explanation on the updates page).

We as a team were allotted 31 books from the entries, and of those, I read the first chapter or more of 26 of them. We have 6 quarter-finalists I’ll be giving more in-depth thoughts on in later posts, but I also wanted to share my thoughts on each book I “taste-tested” in the hopes of them finding more readers, even if they weren’t for me.

Now, before Athena split our pool in half for reading, we each read the blurbs and genres given to us and told her if any particularly caught our eye. I wrote the following:

“I divided my wants into two groups– the ones I really, really want to read and the ones what I still also want but if someone else wants them too that’s ok too, lol. I realize this is more than a handful, sorry!

Top Tier

  • Devil to Pay by R. M. Olson
  • Embargo on Hope by Justin Doyle
  • Horizon by David W. Adams
  • In the Valley, A Shadow by Samantha Tano
  • Mendel’s Ladder by E. S. Fein
  • Sealed Empire by Norbert Zsivicz
  • The Dream of the Forest by Stjepan Varesevac Cobets
  • Whiskey and Warfare by E. M. Hamill

Second Tier

  • Broken Mirror by Cody Sisco  (was traded away)
  • Embers of Esper by Tyler Aston
  • The First Herald by Carol T. Luna
  • The Forsaken Planet by Bryan Wilson
  • Transference by Ian Patterson”

After that, Athena managed to give everyone almost all their wants within 4 days and we began reading.

For all of these, I went in without letting the cover bother me, and without refreshing myself on the blurb or genres, because I didn’t want those to factor into my first impressions. I wanted to keep first impressions to story alone. I’m not too worried about formatting issues, and blurbs are hard so I don’t care about them. Just looking at the story: characters, world (I’m a sucker for worldbuilding), prose, pace, and grammar (not in that order).

Some of the books had backstory and extra worldbuilding material (again, which I love), but I kept to skimming those so I could see how well the story alone could bring me up to speed. I went back to read those or the blurbs later if I needed to or was curious about where things were expected to be heading.

My top picks that I want to read more of: Devil to Pay, The First Herald, The Ghost Gun, To Spy a Star, Transference, Wakers of the Cryocrypt, & Whiskey and Warfare.

Make sure you check out Dave’s initial thoughts as well as his positive thoughts on the departing books.

Also don’t miss Athena’s reviews on the updates page as well as her quick thoughts in Scout Pile Update 1, Update 2, Update 3, Update 4, and Update 5 with our Quarterfinalists announcement. Note– I have not yet read the other judges’ thoughts on these pages (though we have chatted a bit and shared some notes) before writing these taster mini-reviews.

Alright, are we ready? Here we go, in order of when I read them, with the information we were given by the SPSFC team!

First Taste Mini Reviews

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A Universe Upon Us by Marc B. DeGeorge

Blurb: When Ceri boarded the colony ship with her parents, they were escaping the destruction on Earth. They’d sleep in stasis for a thousand years, then wake on their new home, free from the ravages of war. But for Ceri, it was not to be. The adults of the Stratford stole her childhood and replaced it with terror. For seven years, they forced her and her squad to fight against a rival faction. They were called the enemy, but just like her, they were children, trying to survive. One day, Efa, her squad mate and friend, confesses a forbidden love that can only be considered treason. Ceri is furious, but also confused. They were like sisters. Why had Efa kept this from her? The reason forces Ceri into a choice. Should she do what Efa asks, or risk losing the only person on the ship she could trust?

Subgenres: Adventure, Dying Earth, Dystopian, Galactic Empire/Colonization, Military, Noir, Romance, Space Exploration, Space Opera

Target Audience: Young Adult (YA) – Ages 13 – 18

Content Warnings: Graphic violence/murder, Harm to a child, Suicide/self harm, Torture

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As of this point, this book has 10 reviews on Amazon with a 4.4 average, and 9 ratings/7 reviews on Goodreads with a 4.56 average.

My thoughts: I wasn’t sure this story necessarily began in the correct place. I liked the fight sequence, but the limits on the communication technology confused me (I wasn’t sure who could hear what when and why) and I would have enjoyed more reason behind the adults’ actions. The possible treason tension was great but it’d have been even more heightened if I hadn’t been confused (and that could be a me thing, for sure!) I really liked the beginning bit about the enemy being the same as them, but it didn’t seem to jive with Ceri’s internal voice, and I wasn’t sure if it was supposed to or not. The writing is good, though a bit more distant than I personally prefer, and I’d have preferred a stronger sense of setting for it to come alive. The general premise, however, is intriguing! I actually really liked how the romantic plot focuses on side-characters while from the blurb, the main character’s conflict centers on how she deals with her best friend’s forbidden romance. Very cool twist. Also, tiny side note point, but I also just personally love the names of Efa and Ceri.

Read this if you: Want a female-led Ender’s Game type plot with more romance, where the reader is thrown into the action and plot right away. This also seems perfect for people who like to see characters rising up against corrupt authorities, especially in a pseudo-military in space!


Blurb: Beautiful World is a take on modern society’s image culture told through a dystopian medieval sci-fi showdown. It tells the story of how people lose their individuality in exchange for a recipe of beauty and popularity. In a broken future, ink-like stains have appeared on people’s skin splitting the world in two. Now the beautiful people all wear masks and live in a luxurious haven kingdom where strict beauty laws are enforced. The others, ‘stainers’, are segregated to a lawless life in the Outlands ruled by chaos and warlords. But when Chesterman, a mysterious, ruthless leader from the north rises to power with plans to bring the kingdom to its knees, people will have to find out what they truly want to live for beneath their masks. Beautiful World is a grand scale story of Anna, Barvarik, Talessa and the individuals who will shape destruction, hope, terror and change to a broken future where only the most beautiful can sit at its apex.

Subgenres: Dystopian, Military, Post-Apocalyptic

Target Audience: Young Adult (YA) – Ages 13 – 18

Content Warnings: Martial arts/combat, None

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As of this point, this book has 0 reviews on Amazon, and 1 4-star rating without a review on Goodreads.

My thoughts: When doing a contest like this, I think everyone’s excited to find hidden gems, and this one, man, this book is just incredibly creative in its packaging. The table of contents is all pictures! How cool is that? I was very excited when I figured it out, especially since it looks like the pictures not only are the chapter title but also whose head the reader is in for that chapter. The premise is also super, super cool. Some of the descriptions were confusing, but other descriptions absolutely transported me away into the world. I loved the difference in the stories of the outlanders vs Anna, and it raised really intriguing questions. However, the character actions didn’t make enough sense to me.

Read this if you: I just… I just… Please just try this book. You might love it. Especially if you want a picture painted with words, even if the plot doesn’t make a ton of sense at first. Are vibes important to you? This might be your book.


Da Vinci on the Lam by B. D. Booker

Blurb: One week. One chance. Earth is dying as a fungal ‘grit’ and dust storms smoother crop lands and destroy the oceans. The rich flee into space, leaving the poor to die off. If gunslinger Artis Quinn delivers a priceless da Vinci artwork to an offworlder hub on the other side of the country, his kids get tickets off-world. But he’ll have to fight his way through the ruthless Onyx Group and a civilization-ending grit storm to succeed.

Subgenres: Adventure, Dying Earth, Dystopian, Noir

Target Audience: Adult – Ages 18+

Content Warnings: None

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As of this point, this book has 16 reviews on Amazon with a 4.5 average, and 14 ratings/7 reviews on Goodreads with a 4.43 average.

My thoughts: This book kicks off with a bang that I certainly wasn’t expecting, but it sure got me to turn the page! The dual PoVs swap at lightning speed, with many chapters being only a couple pages. However, from them, it’s cool to see the picture of the plot build and build. (And we get an antagonist PoV later on too!) Cool worldbuilding, cool tech, and the strong writing pulled me in. After a little while I had trouble taking notes because I was too pulled into the story.

Read this if you: want a fast-paced mafia-type plot with grit and short chapters.


Blurb: In a world of pirates and murderous ghosts, one naval cadet must choose between loyalty and survival. In the Level’s Naval Academy, officer candidate Silas Hunt stumbles across a secret that could get him hanged for treason. The only hope he has to save his own life and to find justice is to join up with a ruthless pirate captain, a woman known as Mad Dog—even if it means sacrificing everything he’s spent his life working for. The Verity is just a ship of the line, but for Stacks-born Captain Hollis Ives, it’s not just her first command. It’s her one chance to prove that a woman from the slums can handle a high-ranking naval position—even if it means accepting a posting that’s likely to be a death sentence. Treasure Island meets Master and Commander with a science-fiction twist in R.M. Olson’s thrilling new space opera series, The Devil and the Dark.

Subgenres: Adventure, LGBTQIA+, Military, Space Opera, Steampunk

Target Audience: Adult – Ages 18+

Content Warnings: Graphic violence/murder, Martial arts/combat

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As of this point, this book has 128 reviews on Amazon with a 4.2 average, and 73 ratings/7 reviews on Goodreads with a 4.37 average.

My thoughts: Space. Pirates. Plus Space Ghosts!!!! I enjoyed the action sequences and it was easy to picture them in my head. Loved the space ghosts and how they’re real and a legitimate danger. Some quibbles with logic but nothing that removed my suspension of disbelief, especially when I loved the main and side characters (especially meeting the pirate crew!) Gracie and Silas are great foils for each other, and I loved the diversity on the crew–disability rep, trans rep, and various social classes all included. This book stuck in my head even when I wasn’t reading it.

Read this if you: want a quick paced plot with strong action scenes, rebellion against corrupt authorities, and pirates with heart and style. Plus did I mention the cool space ghosts?


Blurb: Even gods have secrets… On planet Vastire, worth is set by the sins of one’s ancestors. Good families rise to the elite and the wicked fall into poverty. Unfortunately for sixteen-year-old Darynn Mark, his father incited a revolution. Now, Darynn scrounges his way through life in the slums. When Vastire is surrounded by an embargo, it gets even harder to survive. That all changes when an alien ship slips through the embargo, seeking Darynn with an offer: finish the revolution and the embargo ends. He might have a chance thanks to mysterious magic powers, and his two companions: clairvoyant crush Fyra and soldierly alien Kaylaa. Cutthroat killers, mystical beasts, Vampires, power-hungry priests and lords, and self-serving spies stand in their way. If the three of them can crack his father’s secret, maybe they can end the embargo and save the poor. If not, another poor orphan will be added to the growing piles of dead.

Subgenres: Adventure, Fantasy, Space Opera, Young Adult

Target Audience: Young Adult (YA) – Ages 13 – 18

Content Warnings: None

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As of this point, this book has 56 reviews on Amazon with a 4.8 average, and 36 ratings/28 reviews on Goodreads with a 4.28 average.

My thoughts: I really enjoyed being thrown right into the action and having to figure out the world as we go. I also liked the idea of the embargo making things worse for those in need–very powerful. The main character’s reactions felt a bit disjointed to me, however, throwing me fairly regularly, and some of the descriptions were rather odd. Some events seemed set up to be big but then were handled fairly easily, while other conflicts seemed like they’d be small and then blew up quickly. We whip from scene to scene at times, rather than flowing more smoothly, though that could be a style preference, but some of the blocking of where characters were in the scene seemed a little odd to me. I really enjoyed the worldbuilding though, especially things like the training manual excerpt, and the big plot points were fun.

Read this if you: fast paced plots with epic overtones and no shortage of violence and desperation. Great for readers who are looking for sci-fi/fantasy space opera vibes.


Blurb: Kyra groaned as she uncoiled the swords from her waist. It looked like she was about to spend another night shampooing entrails out of her hair… Tristan is on the verge of becoming a Warden. It is one of the greatest honours the galaxy can bestow – not bad for a scrawny kid from Earth. With it comes a new life of responsibility, dedication and sacrifice. But after a lifetime on the run, the rainbow-haired mercenary Kyra has a problem. Her past, it seems, has finally caught up with her… And innocent people are paying the price. Her family are in danger. Her home planet is under attack. She is the only one who can make things right – but she can’t do it alone. Join Tris and Kyra on a desperate mission to the furthest reaches of space. Together they must confront an enemy that has haunted Kyra’s dreams, and pursued her across the stars since she was a child. But you can’t fight the past. Or can you? Find out now, in this fast-paced and explosive space opera – perfect for fans of Firefly, The Expanse and Killjoys. (Book is an alternative entry point to a series)

Subgenres: Adventure, Artificial Intelligence, Humorous, Space Opera

Target Audience: Adult – Ages 18+

Content Warnings: Graphic violence/murder, Martial arts/combat

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As of this point, this book has 523 reviews on Amazon with a 4.7 average, and 230 ratings/8 reviews on Goodreads with a 4.60 average.

My thoughts: The prologue was immediately intriguing, and it connected nicely with the first chapter. I enjoyed slowly realizing that the characters all know each other already and have had other adventures (that you can read before this book, but it’s not necessary to). The characters are strong, and the worldbuilding is fully realized, with strong conflict in the plot. Tris felt a little immature sometimes to me, though, and Kyra felt callous. However, the reading was smooth and the storytelling is well done. Also, I love the hair-color-changing scalp crystals–so cool!

Read this if you: love familiar tropes and banter, and are willing to suspend your disbelief in exchange for fun action sequences.


Blurb: An action-packed sci-fi western tale of revenge, love, and identity. The frontier planet Celestine, millennia from now. It was supposed to be the furthest Alix could get from the Xypha Corporation, that all-consuming entity at the heart of humanity’s interstellar expansion. After the Xypha forward station arrives in orbit, Alix, a transgender pilot, finds herself out of work and her ship grounded. She’ll do anything to pay off her mounting debts so she can fly again—even if it means killing for the meanest crime boss in the Isidis Valley. As Xypha’s influence grows, Alix is trapped in a web of betrayal and politics that threatens more than just her life. Armed with a pair of Plasveld-7s, a sharp wit, and with the love of her life by her side, Alix embarks on a deadly path across the valley. Can she flee Xypha’s creeping shadow, or is it time to stop running and stand her ground?

Subgenres: Adventure, Artificial Intelligence, Galactic Empire/Colonization, LGBTQIA+, sci-fi western

Target Audience: Adult – Ages 18+

Content Warnings: Graphic violence/murder, Martial arts/combat

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As of this point, this book has 10 reviews on Amazon with a 5.0 average, and 15 ratings/9 reviews on Goodreads with a 4.93 average.

My thoughts: There are some super cool characters here, from a dapper android to our main character Alix, and all surrounded by strong space-western vibes and immersive worldbuilding. The head-hopping and omniscient narrator didn’t work for me but it very well might work for another reader or a different mood.

Read this if you: are a space western fan missing Firefly and wanting to zoom in cinematically to get your bearings! Definitely don’t pass this by without at least trying it.


Mendel’s Ladder by E. S. Fein

Blurb: Outlast. Outgrow. Outlive. In the ashes of Earth, evolution is the ultimate weapon. The Earth will never be the same. Ravaged by climate destruction, nuclear devastation, and other cataclysmic events, the planet and its people continue to undergo radical changes to survive. A portion of humanity now lives aboard the city-size utopian space station Astrea—the lucky few. Most who fend for themselves on the Earth’s surface have become Nomads: plant/fungus hybrids connected to the growing planetary mind of Earth. The few remaining human societies on Earth survive through incredible cunning, calculation, and courage. Shira and Myriam, cybernetically enhanced warriors hailing from the now destroyed Matriarchy of Wintersvilla, travel across the world in search of a way to protect two human-like girls with seemingly impossible powers. As the women clash with giant mutated beasts and a diverse array of deadly flora, they are intercepted by a Huntress and Hunter—catastrophically lethal creations of the old world thought to have gone extinct over a decade earlier. While these characters’ paths intersect in surprising and explosive ways, ancient powers lurk in the shadows, wielding god-like influence over their lives. Will Shira and Myriam be able to overcome their nightmarish adversaries, or will they succumb to the endless perils of the neoevolved Earth? Dive into Mendel’s Ladder, book one of this epic series, and prepare for an adrenaline-fueled journey set on a post-apocalyptic future Earth, brimming with high-stakes action, adventure, and mystery.

Subgenres: Adventure, Alternate History/Parallel Universe, Dystopian, Fantasy, Genetic Engineering, Hard SF, LGBTQIA+, Post-Apocalyptic, Weird

Target Audience: Adult – Ages 18+

Content Warnings: Body horror, Graphic violence/murder, Martial arts/combat, Torture

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As of this point, this book has 113 reviews on Amazon with a 4.3 average, and 177 ratings/127 reviews on Goodreads with a 4.55 average.

My thoughts: Ok, this is so cool how we begin with a snooty quote that is “published” by the same publisher of this book. That’s just a sweet detail that caught my eye. I really loved realizing through the prose what’s going on, and the worldbuilding is both incredibly clever and unique, as well as well-thought-out and ecologically-minded, even if it’s very anti-humans. (But that’s the whole point of the book, too, so that makes sense in-world.) The Hunter and Huntress were really cool, with some interesting possible symbiosis, and I wanted to learn more there. However, I didn’t like the point of view with the twins and hybrid/nomads, and the writing didn’t fully grab me. Cool concept, but it was a bit too far anti-humanity for me.

Read this if you: want a fresh new world with sentient trees and everything coming back to evolution. Also, if you want a unique tale with immersive worldbuilding including epigraphs showing Mendel becoming worshipped as a god.


Blurb: Ser Edward, an experienced sailor, embarks on perhaps the most daring expedition of the Kingdom of Esenworth so far. His mission is to try to earn the blessing of the Reverend Sven, who is none other than his love’s father, probably the most influential man in the realm. But on his journey beset by fierce storms, he and his men encounter something that could shake to the core not only their faith, but their very concept of the world as well. Meanwhile, far from the oceans, his love, Emma, is trying to disentangle herself from the spider’s web of intrigue and scheming, into which she is being drawn ever deeper by Erick the new king. And the dark clouds just keep gathering above – ancient beasts, stranger than ever, appear at sea, on land and even in the skies more and more frequently. They roar with a metallic screech, their eyes glow with an unnatural light, their skin hard and rigid as armor. Can order be upheld in this age blind to divine prophecy, in the largest kingdom of the North, where the monarch’s mind is coming undone just like reality itself? Our heroes must struggle ceaselessly to understand the hidden secrets of their world and their own origins. But what are they going to do once they have the answers?

Subgenres: Adventure, Artificial Intelligence, Crime & Mystery, Fantasy, Horror, Post-Apocalyptic, Romance, Weird

Target Audience: Adult – Ages 18+

Content Warnings: Graphic violence/murder, Sexual violence/rape, Torture

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As of this point, this book has 44 reviews on Amazon with a 4.3 average, and 156 ratings/78 reviews on Goodreads with a 4.03 average.

My thoughts: This is a dark tale with a dangerous sea monster and a love torn apart by being thought dead by shipwreck + a prince who can’t take No for an answer. There’s a big time gap in the story (and age gap in the relationships) and it was cool to be immersed in this mostly-fantasy world, but I was just not the target audience for this story.

Read this if you: want Game of Thrones mixed with mechanical Godzilla!


Blurb: “Some secrets are best left undiscovered.” Pyramid, the great heart of Redemption, lies under siege by tribal invaders that threaten to destroy the very civilization that the Dominions have created. The Engineer, Actaeon, leads a force of Raedelleans from the south, where they pause to investigate the secrets of abandoned Travail in search of aid for the battle to come. At the same time, the new Princess of Raedelle, Eisandre, sails down the River of Arches with her Thyrian allies to attack from the Great Sea to the west. Travail’s secrets are darker than expected, and the reason behind the Loresworn evacuation may soon spread to the rest of the city. Meanwhile, far to the north, Ajman and Shield fight over the lands of Czeryn, left desolate by an artifact that just might extinguish all life in the city at the hands of an unseen enemy known only as the Veiled One. In his quest to save Redemption, will Actaeon be able to overcome the old enmity between the Dominions to unite against these threats? Or will all civilization fall, just as the Ancients had ages ago? One thing is certain: in Redemption, everything comes with a cost.

Subgenres: Adventure, Dying Earth, Fantasy, Hard SF, LitRPG, Military, Post-Apocalyptic, Engineering

Target Audience: Adult – Ages 18+

Content Warnings: Cannibalism, Graphic violence/murder, Martial arts/combat, Torture

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As of this point, this book has 4 reviews on Amazon with a 5.0 average, and 9 ratings/7 reviews on Goodreads with a 4.22 average.

My thoughts: This one had a primer on what went before, but I skimmed it since this is supposed to be able to be read without knowing the previous adventures of the main characters. I love the idea of a Prince Engineer, and the blend of science fiction and fantasy totally worked for me. Much of the banter was cool, though I think there might have been some possible racism and homophobia in the characters–possibly by design? The racism definitely seemed by design, with characters wanting to wipe out less advanced peoples because they were annoying.

Read this if you: want a blend of science fiction and fantasy that is deep in worldbuilding and has already-established relationships including side-characters.


Blurb: -The Power of the Stars- “With it, we are capable of greatness or are a weapon that will only bring suffering to the universe.” When mysterious aircraft wreak havoc across Earth’s skies, it is revealed that there are clusters of other planets where humankind resides, distant worlds where the people wield the power of the stars themselves. It is an energy force that can bring about miracles or, as the alien fleet’s ruthless leader displays, unleash horrors beyond imagination. After experiencing a loss during the onslaught, Colton Samson, an ordinary college student, vows to protect his loved ones at any cost. But to learn the power to do so, he must enlist into the Army of the Universal Throne—a second alien force with its own agenda. With the revelation of a secret prophecy foretelling humanity’s demise and Colton’s improbable role in preventing it, he embarks alongside a diverse group of friends to the Throne’s capital, the planet of Vintara. There he faces prejudice from supposed allies, lifelike combat simulations that test him to his core, and the looming threat of a universal war. Only by embracing his true potential can Colton hope to secure the safety he seeks, in a universe that views him as nothing more than Forsaken.

Subgenres: Adventure, Fantasy, First Contact, Military, Space Opera

Target Audience: Adult – Ages 18+

Content Warnings: Graphic violence/murder, Martial arts/combat

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As of this point, this book has 147 reviews on Amazon with a 4.4 average, and 120 ratings/52 reviews on Goodreads with a 4.28 average.

My thoughts: The prologue set up an interesting scene, very different (by design) from the first chapter, set in modern day Earth. The attack was interesting, and I liked seeing how the prologue tied into the story. The aliens felt a little villainy, but I enjoyed the newcomers and the tension there. I liked the magic surprise, too, with magic + aliens and spaceships here.

Read this if you: want a college-age protagonist coming into his magic and joining a galactic army to fight evil aliens! If you like stories of Earth realizing we’re not alone in the universe, with space opera vibes, give this book a try.


Blurb: When tradition means damnation, and the future is the past… Alia Academia – school for the elite. Genetically modified Oka Latellay faces discrimination orchestrated by fellow student Allen Debois. Allen enforces a caste system by the Purveyors of Tradition, keeping modified people in the bottom rung of society. But Oka’s gumption inspires him to start a fencing tourney where everything is at stake. If she loses, her life in high society is over. But if she wins, so ends the bullying of all mods in the school. Oka struggles with her fencing bouts and growing feelings for Allen as he reveals there is more to him than the cold cruelty he portrays. Simultaneously, Allen is torn between adoration for Oka and the Purveyors of Tradition influence. Choosing the former could risk his family’s wealth and good name. Little do the two know how much their struggles intertwine when Allen’s friend begins to vie for Oka’s affections, and Allen finds himself blackmailed about his family’s past. In a post-World War world where society functions on sleight of hand and discrimination, Oka and Allen must find the one thing that will save them. Love.

Subgenres: Dystopian, Genetic Engineering, LGBTQIA+, Romance

Target Audience: Young Adult (YA) – Ages 13 – 18

Content Warnings: Martial arts/combat, Bullying

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As of this point, this book has 0 reviews on Amazon and 0 ratings/reviews on Goodreads.

My thoughts: Our main character vacillates between haughty and self-assured, and being shy and unsure, overly eager for acceptance, but this totally works for the character and backstory. There’s great worldbuilding well-woven into the plot with a world war leading to the outlawing of modified humans, “mods”–of which our main character is one. Loved the “Father, I need a sword” line.

Read this if you: like enemies-to-lovers (especially bully romance) and not-like-other-girls vibes. Enjoy fencing stories with teenage characters in elite schools– especially with an anime feel.


Blurb: Mission: Impossible meets The Long Way to a Small Angry Planet in this fast, fun, and action-packed spy-fi adventure. One star can break a galaxy. Agent Renault plays cloak and dagger against her most formidable opponent yet – a ruthless and cunning expert at cards and more deadly arts besides. Her mission: retrieve a stolen asset known as the Star Eye. Aided by her eccentric agency team and armed with state-of-the-art gadgets, she races to solve a devious conspiracy and bring down her elusive foe. But a specter haunts the agency’s halls, whispering secrets from its past. Allies and enemies alike wear masks in the espionage game. Lilline must decide who to trust if she hopes to take down a sinister and vengeful mastermind before a wave of terror crashes across the stars.

Subgenres: Adventure, Space Opera, spy-fi

Target Audience: Adult – Ages 18+

Content Warnings: Graphic violence/murder, Martial arts/combat, Torture, hostage

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As of this point, this book has 18 reviews on Amazon with a 4.6 average, and 29 ratings/11 reviews on Goodreads with a 4.52 average.

My thoughts: This throws the reader right into the story with great worldbuilding and quick pacing that pulled me right in. I enjoyed the tech, and the action sequences were great. Things slowed down a bit after chapter 3, but there’s so many cool aliens and fun side characters (love, love, love Pin) to meet, plus political-organizational ramifications and intrigue that there’s still good tension. The main character’s grandma is a great addition, with her ex-spy past both helping and annoying the main character.

Read this if you: James Bond in Space! James Bond in Space! I totally see Mission Impossible, too, with amazing worldbuilding, but I don’t see much TLWTASAP except for the amazing, well-thought out range of aliens. If you like spy stories with great action scenes, try this book!


Blurb: Nicholas Fiveboroughs is a Sicko, someone that takes on others’ illnesses. In a city where diseases can be transferred, the rich buy longer lives without pain, and the poor get a short life of constant sickness. Maybe it was fate, or maybe someone is looking out for him, but after Nicholas barely survives his latest affliction, he gets the chance to try and change things. To finally stop the whole disease transfer network. Tensions escalate as Nicholas infiltrates a higher society he doesn’t understand, and starts to fall for the very person he needs to manipulate to be successful. And between run-ins with a talking animal and genetically modified humans, the world around him just keeps getting stranger. Can Nicholas tear down the disease transfer architecture? And can he do it without losing his own humanity along the way?

Subgenres: Adventure, Dystopian

Target Audience: Adult – Ages 18+

Content Warnings: Drug use, Explicit sex, Graphic violence/murder, Martial arts/combat

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As of this point, this book has 23 reviews on Amazon with a 4.5 average, and 36 ratings/25 reviews on Goodreads with a 4.33 average.

My thoughts: I love the illustrated ads at the beginning–what a great way to establish mood and theme! I also love the opening pages. The discombobulation of a long illness was shown so well, and it’s a great way to introduce the reader to what we need to know. The wrist-screen tech is also cool, as well as the rest of the tech we get introduced to (not just flying cars, but yes, those as well!) Great worldbuilding details, and strong characterizations really make this an enjoyable read.

Read this if you: want a bring-down-high-society book mixed with infiltration and the lower classes being literally preyed on by the rich. Also if you like great characters plus tech that you don’t need to fully understand to accept.


Blurb: Running on caffeine and spite with nothing left to prove. GOLDEN GIRLS meets FIREFLY in this rollicking space opera adventure. Maryn Alessi retired from mercenary service after her last assignment went horribly sideways and settled down on a quiet planet with the love of her life. Unexpectedly widowed, Maryn must fulfill a promise to return her mate’s ashes to zer home planet for funeral rites, but a brutal civil war has destabilized space travel. Former Artemis Corps sisters-in-arms and their sassy ship, the Golden Girl, are up to the task, counting on luck and their rather sketchy cargo business to get Maryn passage through the contested star lanes. But when the crew of the Girl rescues survivors of a ruthless war crime, Maryn and her ride-or-die friends must take up their old profession to save the lives of innocents from a genocidal dictator.

Subgenres: Adventure, LGBTQIA+, Space Opera

Target Audience: Adult – Ages 18+

Content Warnings: Graphic violence/murder

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As of this point, this book has 9 reviews on Amazon with a 5.0 average, and 14 ratings/10 reviews on Goodreads with a 4.86 average.

My thoughts: Holy. Smokes. I love this voice. It’s totally the Golden Girls. I forgot to take notes, I was so pulled into the story, and it also stayed with me even when I wasn’t reading it anymore. The ship name (Golden Girl) was a bit on the nose, but it also made me chuckle, so. My biggest quibble is the cover, but I can ignore that in favor of the amazing story inside.

Read this if you: want amazing friendships to whisk you away into a whole other world with new, unique aliens and fully-realized middle-aged characters on a foundation of excellent writing. If you want an entertaining read that also feels like a hug (with some The Long Way to a Small Angry Planet Becky Chambers vibes) pick this up!


Blurb: Hypatia is a companion child, a cyborg with the consciousness of a child, designed to help her non-verbal human sister, Alexandra, navigate the world. When a flash knocks out the power and a civil war erupts, the sisters are forced to travel through powerless cities and dangerous country roads in search of refuge on the eastern coast of the United States. Realizing that without access to a charging station it’s only a matter of time before her battery fails, Hypatia must deliver Alexandra to safety before it’s too late. Yet, as Hypatia and Alexandra encounter other companion children that have gone berserk, Hypatia begins to suspect the flash may have done more than just take out the power. Can Alexandra trust her sister, and is Hypatia exactly what she seems?

Subgenres: Adventure, Artificial Intelligence, Dystopian, Horror, Post-Apocalyptic

Target Audience: Adult – Ages 18+

Content Warnings: Graphic violence/murder, Harm to an animal, Martial arts/combat, Implied sexual violence, but never actually explicitly or graphically written.

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As of this point, this book has 1 5-star review on Amazon, and 4 ratings/3 reviews on Goodreads with a average 4.50.

My thoughts: This was a really cool premise with background shown through time jumps back and forth, plus another storyline in a different location that impacts the main one in chilling ways. I enjoyed Alexandra’s autism rep, though I had some trouble placing about how old she was, and I liked the way the major plot points were unveiled. The action sequences were fun, and I was rooting for our protagonists.

Read this if you: are looking for a story that can’t be fully shown without the two storylines, and enjoy piecing together what’s going on from the clues given between the storylines.


Blurb: ENTER THE FUNGALVERSE. BEAT THE WINTER BLUES. Blade Runner, True Detective and District 9 meld with the weird worlds of Jeff VanderMeer, Philip K. Dick and China Miéville in Adrian M. Gibson’s hallucinatory, fungalpunk noir debut. Two years after a devastating defeat in the decade-long Spore War, the island nation of Hōppon and its capital city of Neo Kinoko are occupied by invading Coprinian forces. Its fungal citizens are in dire straits, wracked by food shortages, poverty and an influx of war refugees. Even worse, the corrupt occupiers exploit their power, hounding the native population. As a winter storm looms over the metropolis, NKPD homicide detective Henrietta Hofmann begrudgingly partners up with mushroom-headed patrol officer Koji Nameko to investigate the mysterious murders of fungal and half-breed children. Their investigation drags them deep into the seedy underbelly of a war-torn city, one brimming with colonizers, criminal gangs, racial division and moral decay. In order to solve the case and unravel the truth, Hofmann must challenge her past and embrace fungal ways. What she and Nameko uncover in the midst of this frigid wasteland will chill them to the core, but will they make it through the storm alive?

Subgenres: Crime & Mystery, Cyberpunk, Dystopian, Fantasy, Noir, Suspense, Weird

Target Audience: Adult – Ages 18+

Content Warnings: Body horror, Drug use, Graphic violence/murder, Harm to a child, Torture

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As of this point, this book has 101 reviews on Amazon with a 4.4 average, and 289 ratings/120 reviews on Goodreads with a 3.99 average.

My thoughts: Ok first off, this is a well-done story, and my quibbles with it are my preferences. I was way too excited for “fungalpunk” and honestly, the mycelial network and fungal worldbuilding were easily my favorite parts. The characters feel real, and the mystery unfolds skillfully. I was just expecting the fungus worldbuilding to permeate through the whole of the Hopponite culture, instead of awesome mushroom stuff with a layer of faux-Japanese-coded culture on top. I wanted all mushrooms, so I was disappointed. The main character, too, is very racist by design–she doesn’t realize she’s part of the problem, but being privy to her every prejudiced thought made me dislike her. I loved Koji, however, and rooted for him quite a lot!

Read this if you: love Legacy of the Brightwash and want an intimate first-person narration to carry you away into another murder mystery involving colonialism and racial divides. If you’re looking for gritty murder, corrupt police, a jaded detective with a fully fleshed out background, plus amazing fungus powers, check this out.


Blurb: In a post-cybernetic world where most have abandoned their neural enhancements, seventy-year-old Herbert Ferris clings to his outdated tech—and the troubled legacy it carries. Once a rogue hacker, Ferris now clocks in at Re/Live Corporation as a digital ecologist, crafting biomes for the popular fantasy game world, New Europa. But when a glitch starts turning players’ avatars pink, triggering an online uproar, Ferris is thrust into the heart of a spiraling corporate crisis. Ferris is ordered to clean up the mess alone. Fed up, he decides to go non-con, using his neuromod to become the perfect corporate zombie until the storm blows over. But when he reawakens, the chaos has only escalated: protesters are picketing Re/Live’s head office, his job is on the line, and, to make matters worse, an innocent schoolgirl has gone missing. Gripped by a paranoia he hasn’t felt in decades, Ferris races to uncover the truth, clashing with police, protesters, ruthless rivals, and—worst of all—his vindictive ex. Non-conscious is a darkly humorous journey of one man’s battle to reclaim his dignity and sanity in a world where the line between fantasy and reality has blurred beyond recognition.

Subgenres: Artificial Intelligence, Crime & Mystery

Target Audience: Adult – Ages 18+

Content Warnings: Explicit sex

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As of this point, this book has 0 reviews on Amazon and 0 ratings/reviews on Goodreads.

My thoughts: My first thought with this was “what am I reading?” and it continued well into the first couple chapters. It took me a bit to realize we’re inside a virtual reality style system, but the way this is shown and the technology clicked nicely when it was revealed. The voice is crude and the story is weird, but it’s also like The IT Crowd plus Mythic Quest but with VR and implanted data jacks. I really liked the biome crafting portion.

Read this if you: love the IT Crowd and Mythic Quest and want to embark on a new, unusual, storyline.


Blurb: More than one hundred years have passed since the cataclysm. The year is 2197 and Earth’s surviving inhabitants now live in heavenly cities above the clouds, unwilling to descend back to the unstable surface. Helen is a lawyer whose life is seemingly perfect, complete with career, partner and plans for a family. But she soon discovers that it is all an illusion. A car accident turns her life in a different direction and she finds herself on the Earth’s surface, in a forested world utterly foreign to her. Is it true that Earth cannot sustain life? What if the truth was entirely different? What if there were survivors — and how would Helen return to her own world?

Subgenres: Adventure, Dystopian, Post-Apocalyptic, Romance

Target Audience: Adult – Ages 18+

Content Warnings: Cannibalism, Sexual violence/rape

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As of this point, this book has 23 reviews on Amazon with a 3.9 average, and 47 ratings/39 reviews on Goodreads with a 3.94 average.

My thoughts: I was looking forward to reading this, and I like some of the ideas here, but I felt like the sex scenes were entirely unnecessary and I got whiplash with the boyfriend-person. I did like the crash and entry in to the forest, and I enjoyed Arn and the conflict between nature savvy vs tech savvy. The additional tension of killer robots was good, but the writing style didn’t work for me personally.

Read this if you: love nature vs technology tropes and uncovering dystopia veiled as almost- utopia.


Blurb: What price would you pay to protect your country? When his city burned around him, Zacharias Eld swore on his life it would never happen again. Sworn in as the First Herald, there is no camera he cannot access, no idle chatter he cannot hear. No secrets he cannot unearth. But a break-in at a lab reveals the hole in the network he spent seven years to build. Worse, the evidence is contaminated, the suspects missing, and the innocent refuse to speak. Zach soon finds himself in a world he thought he had purged years ago, festering in the shadows he once scoured. As the layers of the conspiracy peel back, so too, does the safety of Zach those around him. Either Zach finds the culprit or he will witness the fall of the city he’d spent his life to protect.

Subgenres: Crime & Mystery, Dystopian, Fantasy, Genetic Engineering, Post-Apocalyptic, Suspense

Target Audience: Adult – Ages 18+

Content Warnings: Graphic violence/murder, Martial arts/combat, Non-consensual medical procedures, Torture

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As of this point, this book has 3 reviews on Amazon with a 4.6 average, and 5 ratings/5 reviews on Goodreads with a 4.20 average.

My thoughts: I really liked this story, and I enjoyed Zach. Him having GERD was an interesting addition to his character, plus his forgetfulness, both helping to round him out and making me curious how they might affect his case. His son was interesting, and then Ekkehart was a total wild card. I didn’t think all the chapters were necessarily required, but overall I really enjoyed this and plan to read more. I enjoyed the investigation aspect into the rebels, and the tension inside me sorta rooting for the guy whose job it is to catch the people trying to bring down the immortal god ruler who probably has reigned too long.

Read this if you: love strong space opera vibes and multiple PoV stories with immortal god rulers and rebellions looking to take them down.


Blurb: A newbie pilot with a secret, broken comms, alien artifact, viral code, empty space. What can go wrong? Jax, a freshly minted spaceship pilot had a simple job: taking a group of sick people to Rebels’ Republic space station to have their brain implants fixed while keeping her secret – secret. She had a smart plan to get it done: just some tweaking of the comms to make it look like an accident. But her ship had some surprises aboard: two healthy passengers, who weren’t who they claimed to be, a real emergency, and a piece of virally spreading rogue code. Then… came some more problems… Can a loner learn teamwork to survive and save the solar system from collapse?

Subgenres: Adventure, Artificial Intelligence, First Contact, Galactic Empire/Colonization, Space Exploration, Space Opera, Techno Thriller

Target Audience: Adult – Ages 18+

Content Warnings: None

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As of this point, this book has 21 reviews on Amazon with a 4.0 average, and 8 ratings/1 review on Goodreads with a 3.88 average.

My thoughts: I really liked Jax’s predicament, and her and Rutger’s interactions were interesting as they both tried to figure out if the other could be trusted, while both are simultaneously holding back secrets. Lulu was an interesting side character and I was curious what she was after. I didn’t fully follow the reasons behind the decisions the characters made, however.

Read this if you: like secrets-driven plots with learning-teamwork character arcs.


Blurb: The future. The human race is extinct. Earth is ruled by “eltecs”, descendants of the AIs humans created before their demise. While searching for prehistoric cave paintings, two eltec explorers discover a hidden cryogenic crypt containing 23 perfectly preserved human bodies frozen inside crystal columns. As eltec society argues over who might have built the crypt and what to do with it, one of its occupants is restored to life. Human beings are no longer extinct, but, for reasons of their own, not every eltec wants to see them come back. The only living man on Earth is in terrible danger.

Subgenres: Artificial Intelligence, Hard SF, Metaphysical/Visionary, Post-Apocalyptic, Techno Thriller

Target Audience: Adult – Ages 18+

Content Warnings: Descriptions of nuclear holocaust/mass death/starvation/illness, etc.

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As of this point, this book has 4 reviews on Amazon with a 4.0 average, and 8 ratings/4 reviews on Goodreads with a 4.25 average.

My thoughts: Very interesting beginning–what a cool way to suck the reader in. I love the archaeologist sentient robots and the descriptions were great. There’s some narrative distance, but it didn’t bother me too much. I love the way the tension develops as the robots (eltecs) try to figure out what they’re going to do about their discovery. The Assembly and their differing thoughts was very cool to read, plus reading about the secret museum that shouldn’t be secret. This jealousy over aliens not contacting the eltecs is amusing and yet understandable. It amuses me that the eltecs make such leaps to conclusions and anxieties, instead of being more logical and methodical, but I adore Shulvara’s compassion and curiosity, and I’m enjoying the tension of this timetable.

Read this if you: want to follow nonhuman characters as they deal with an extraordinary blow to some fundamental truths of their culture in very human ways.


Blurb: There is no salvation among the stars… With every known planet, colony or settlement mostly ruined or completely destroyed, a desperate crew of humans onboard the starship Odyssey, hear rumours of a mythical phenomenon called the Horizon. This magical place on the edge of known space is believed to transport those who traverse it, back in time to the moment they were at their happiest. With only death, heartache and baron wastelands surrounding them, the crew head toward the Horizon. However to reach this phenomenon, they must cross the Expanse – a 30 day trip through entirely empty space. No light, no stars, no planets… nothing. At least that’s what they think.

Subgenres: Cosmic Horror, Dystopian, First Contact, Horror, Post-Apocalyptic, Space Exploration

Target Audience: Adult – Ages 18+

Content Warnings: Body horror, Graphic violence/murder

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As of this point, this book has 8 reviews on Amazon with a 4.8 average, and 16 ratings/13 reviews on Goodreads with a 4.56 average.

My thoughts: I had wanted to read this one, but the prologue felt almost like a textbook in places (perhaps by design?). I did like the mystery of what happened to the ships 3 months out from Earth, but I wasn’t sure why constraints were the way they are. The action felt over-dramatic for me, like it was going for shock. I did like the mystery of finding the Odyssey, though.

Read this if you: want spaceship combat sequences with a potential cosmic horror mystery creeping in.


Blurb: Sasha Michaels has it all. She’s got the looks, some natural, some bought-and-paid for. She’s got the fame, with over one-hundred million Omniverse subscribers and a shot at breaking into the coveted Top 100. She’s got the wealth that comes with both. And she has the ultimate accessory, an even more famous husband. Alex Michaels is a HotDropper, a cybernetic corporate mercenary whose missions are streamed worldwide. But when Alex is killed on only his second mission, Sasha soon finds out that everything she thought she owned is now property of his paymasters, who invested hundreds of millions in him and intend to collect on the debt. Now she must serve as a rank-and-file trooper in the militia of the LifeWise corporation, until she pays off or she dies. Some people call it indentured service, but the troopers know it by a different name. They call it the Widow’s Tithe.

Subgenres: Military

Target Audience: Adult – Ages 18+

Content Warnings: Graphic violence/murder, Martial arts/combat

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As of this point, this book has no reviews on Amazon and 3 ratings/2 reviews on Goodreads with a 3.33 average.

My thoughts: This has an interesting structure, with a prelude plus multiple interludes scattered throughout (and lots of footnotes). Interesting way to dump the reader into the world feet first. I liked the idea of taking streaming (especially monetized) and running with how far a society could potentially take it. This plus gamifying police and military action really worked for the book I thought. I was excited to see some Capoeira–but then a detail threw me out of the story a bit, as a capoeirista. First time that’s happened, lol! I really liked Wilma, though, and the side characters were interesting.

Read this if you: want and exploration of monetizing human life, while following a character being dumped from riches into rags (or in this case, indentured servitude). If you also like main characters who may not be nice but are 100% stubborn in their refusal to give up, you might enjoy this!


Blurb: The Ghost Gun kills what it hits, its ghost bullets ensnaring the victim’s soul to their killer. Except nothing is that simple. Certainly not an apparently simple theft that leads detectives into a war between secret societies over artifacts which have been around for millennia, their origin unknown, their abilities inexplicable. Demoted to Vice due to departmental politics, Detective Cassie Kinsala sees an opportunity to restore her career path. But what looks like it might offer a decent arrest soon turns into a quagmire the law might not cover, and might not protect her from. Jimmy Bancroft used to be a cop. Working for the other side lets him avoid paperwork. Investigating rumours of a competitor moving in on his employer’s interests, he becomes entangled in a war between criminals and a secret society. And someone might be trying to set him up.

Subgenres: Crime & Mystery

Target Audience: Adult – Ages 18+

Content Warnings: None

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As of this point, this book has 1 4-star review on Amazon, and 2 ratings/1 reviews on Goodreads with a 4.00 average.

My thoughts: Great voice, fun beginning, and enjoyable banter! I really like how the reader is shown the world around us, and while there’s not a ton of technology immediately, the artifacts are intriguing (and sus). I enjoy both main characters and the investigation from both sides–very cool tension.

Read this if you: want a noir mystery with dual PoVs and great banter, but easy on the sci-fi elements right away.


Blurb: Kara is an outcast. A freak. A non-telepath. The only person to ever show her any kindness − Caethiid, is dead. Ever since the state informed her of Caethiid’s death, Kara’s life has been bleak, consisting of a tedious job, a small book collection and the painful memories of a love that never was. But Kara also harbours a dark secret. Within her is a terrible power, one that’s manifested in times of great danger, with devastating consequences. When Caethiid miraculously reappears, Kara’s joy is short-lived. From across the galaxy, Caethiid has been listening to Kara’s thoughts. He knows her secret and he wants to use her power to overthrow the state. Kara finds herself trapped in his twisted game of psychological manipulation. As Caethiid’s ruthless nature is revealed, Kara realises the man she once knew may no longer exist. With Caethiid’s grip tightening, Kara begins to wonder whether she can trust her own mind, or whether everything she thought she knew was part of his plan all along.

Subgenres: Galactic Empire/Colonization, Noir, Weird, psychological

Target Audience: Adult – Ages 18+

Content Warnings: Graphic violence/murder, Sexual violence/rape, Torture

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As of this point, this book has 15 reviews on Amazon with a 4.1 average, and 12 ratings/10 reviews on Goodreads with a 4.67 average.

My thoughts: Wow, love the showing of this worldbuilding. Nicely done, and great onboarding for the reader. Our MC is very easy to like, and her hearing Cae when he’s dead is very intriguing. (I also ran out of time before we decided on quarterfinalists, so I haven’t read as far in this one. I’m excited to read more though!)

Read this if you: psychological thrillers with sci-fi elements and mainstream telepathy.


Please, please remember that these are only my thoughts. So much of reading enjoyment is subjective, so my hope is that you’ve discovered something new to take a chance on!

Also, let me give a big thank you to all the authors for providing judges with review copies, as well as the team of the SPSFC for organizing the contest!

New character quiz!

Have you ever wondered who you most match personality-wise among the characters from Windward and Children of the Nexus (Prelude Cycle, Between Starfalls, and Let Loose the Fallen)?

Now’s your chance to find out!

This character quiz categorizes you as either: Palon, Windward, Aturadin, Kaemada, Ra’ael, Takiyah, Taunos, Answer, Amanah, or Emin. There are 25 questions, so it only takes a few minutes.

Take it multiple times to see who you get, and share with your friends!

Cover Reveal – watch out for Bloodflower!

I’m really excited about this new upcoming book because I’ve had a chance to see it in various stages and I can attest to the incredible polish the author has put into it. One of my CP’s is releasing her debut novel upcoming, and it’s titled Bloodflower. It kicks off the start to a series: The Hidden Flames Artifact.

Check out this blurb:

Born into a world of futuristic technology, ecologist Jàden Ravenscraft wields starship fuel like magic but she’s losing control of her power. Marked as a dangerous weapon, she’s trapped in hypersleep for 4000 years and wakes in the backwoods of a terraformed moon. Now she’s determined to find her reincarnated lover and escape back to the stars before her power takes control… or she is found. 

Because one life is not the end. 

The man she loves has lived more than twenty lives without her, and Jàden’s alone in a world of swords and sorcery. When exiled prison guard Captain Jon Ayers shields her from an attack, Jàden seizes the chance for safety and human connection. Using her magic, she ties her energy to Jon, forging a bond to keep him close to her side. 

But Jon is hunted by mercenaries for the pendant he carries, a key to the gateway between worlds, and their bond stirs a desire neither can ignore. Jàden is faced with the hardest choice of her life: between Jon and her reincarnated ex. Saving one lover will destroy the other, and the wrong choice will land her in chains she can never escape.

If you love the blend of science fiction and fantasy as much as I do, you’re gonna want to run, not walk, to grab Bloodflower. Better yet, pre-order it, or put it on your Goodreads shelf so you don’t forget. An ecologist protagonist, a steamy romance (for all you romance lovers), amazing worldbuilding with new creatures and plantlife, and horses and technology. Swords and spaceships. I really can’t say enough good things about it.

Ok but you came for the art, yes, I know. Check it out!

Isn’t that absolutely gorgeous? And the details just give me shivers, knowing what’s in the book!

And the author? Also phenomenal.

K. J. Harrowick is a fantasy and science fiction author with a strong passion for blending grimdark worlds and futurist technology with threads of romance and revenge. She is the co-creator of Writer In Motion, contributed to the Science in Sci-Fi series , and was a panelist in the Write Hive online convention. With an unhealthy obsession for dragons, tacos, cheese, and beer, K. J. also works as a freelance web developer and graphic designer on a broad range of client projects before falling down the occasional rabbit hole. 

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Prelude Cycle!

Prelude Cycle!

I can’t wait to send you a free book!

Prelude Cycle is a novella associated with the Children of the Nexus series and it’s the perfect way to get introduced to the world and characters of Children of the Nexus. If you haven’t read one of the books yet and want to see if you like my writing style, this is perfect for you. And if you already have read my books and want to get more insight into the world and beginnings, Prelude Cycle will do that as well.

Prelude Cycle is a series of four vignette short stories each focused on one of the main characters from Children of the Nexus and arranged in a series of seasons, set about three years before the beginning of Between Starfalls. Taunos puts himself on the line for a chance to gain entry into the library of Far Dahutad. Takiyah balances her love of learning with the judgements of her community. Kaemada struggles mind to mind. Ra’ael faces challenges on her path to becoming a priestess.

To get Prelude Cycle, simply sign up for my mailing list. If you enjoy Prelude Cycle, check out Between Starfalls next.

Let Loose the Fallen Cover Reveal!

I am so excited to share with you all the second book in the Children of the Nexus series, Let Loose the Fallen! I’m almost done applying the last edits and then just need to go over it one more time for quality control.

In this book, more of the world gets thrown in and it becomes firmly sword-and-planet science fantasy as the characters learn more about what’s been going on in the shadows and put together pieces of the past to form epic stakes. All four main characters have amazing character arcs here that I (though of course biased) simply adore.

Here, let me show you the blurb:

The priestess searches for her faith.

The fire-wielder wrestles with her past.

The psion dreams of peace.

And the hero is torn between his heart and his duty.
While grief scatters the four protectors to the winds, outside forces write history according to their own whims. The fate of the Rinaryns lies twined with that of the boy, Eian, caught in a tug of war the heroes are unaware of.
But the evidence lies waiting for Taunos and the others to see, if only they can move past their betrayal.

Dave Brasgalla is truly amazing to work with. We went back and forth this time getting some background people in the cover to look a little more uniquely fantasy and he did an absolutely phenomenal job. He took a look at the trends in the last year and went bold with the color, really leaning into the surrounding setting while still making Taunos, the main of the four for this book, the focus. And he’s three for three, showing me an image that I knew immediately was how Taunos looks. Capturing his essence and giving him a face.

Check out this cover!

Here’s Taunos, looking a little worse for wear after Book One’s adventures, a little rugged, a little tired. And surrounding him, all sorts of people from all sorts of nations, some of them looking at him with wariness, most just going about their business.

It’s perfect!

Let Loose the Fallen is the second book of the Children of the Nexus series, and will be released on January 22nd!

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Remember, Book One of the series, Between Starfalls, is free in KU.

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Writer In Motion Season 3 Wrap-up

I adore Writer In Motion and that’s really no secret by now. Every time I participate, even when I’m all over the place like this time, I learn something new.

This time, I tried something a little different, with a new protagonist and a sassy voice and really enjoyed the result.

The best part for me was being more involved behind the scenes with all the goings on that make Writer In Motion run smoothly. I really enjoyed working with the team, even though it hardly felt like I did anything some daysI It’s hard to find better people to work with!

I also very much enjoyed working with my CPs this round, as usual. I like to mix it up to work with different people, and this time I had the chance to work with Melissa (who I’ve beta read for before, and is an amazing writer) and Erin Fulmer. It was great to give them thoughts on their fantastic stories too. I also ran that round past the wonderful Lauren, and my critique group!

Then for round two, I had the chance to read for Kim B and Dan Koboldt, who were each incredible, along with SM Roffey. It’s so fun to get to work with people in the writing community who I haven’t had the chance to work with before.

Next time I plan on participating (of course!) and would love to help out behind the scenes again too!

Space Cows 3: Final Draft

I had some great help on this round too! My CPs gave me wonderful things to think about. Dan Koboldt had a great point about strengthening the overall arc, but I ran out of words. While technically I can go over 1000 words now that this is the final draft, I try to stick to it anyway in the spirit of the challenge. I could have altered some of the thoughts of Goat in the beginning, but I felt like that would give a different tone and character to Goat than what I was going for.

SM Roffey gave me some of those words though, pointing out a sentence I could cut, and Kim B wanted more detail of the inside of the building, so I used my 9 extra words there instead with some worldbuilding.

Beyond those changes though, it was mostly necessary nitpicks. People still suggested changes to “Not following orders” so I finally fixed that, but I kept my “full with leaves” because “full of leaves” doesn’t work for me and I couldn’t come up with something better. The hazards of editing power-sessions: now my worder needs a break.

But I really enjoy my little Space Goats, and I am pleased to present my final draft, complete at 996 words:

You sproing through the scraggly bushes that cling to the hill, muzzle raised to the cool breeze. Alien scents wash over you, so different from the ship’s sterile, recycled air. The trees are full with leaves, and the sky is blue above the darker bruising of the distant mountains.

It’s rather disappointing. Shouldn’t alien planets be more, well, alien?  

And there’s a blocky, artificial structure right at the top of the hill, not even trying to hide. Training exercises are supposed to be hard, aren’t they? Otherwise what’s the point? It’s all dreadfully boring, so you stretch your neck out, rising on the tips of your back hooves to reach a long-hanging branch and nibble at the twigs there. It’s against the Code, but who’s gonna tell on you? Cow? Cow’s not here. She’ll be in the building that’s clearly where you’re meant to go, waiting for you to show up for your briefing. 

But you’re on an alien planet! Simmering underneath the disappointment, excited energy thrums through your bones. The grass isn’t made of crystal, and the sky’s not green, but it’s still a completely new ball of rock hurtling through space, and you’ve actually done it. You’re a Space Goat and nothing can take that away from you. 

All you need to complete the day is a nice glass of wine, the fruitier the better. 

Oh, and to finish your mission, you suppose. 

You can hear the Whale as distinctly as you did when he stood in front of you, a scowl on his long face. “This mission is simple. You’ll be Dropped on an alien planet. First, use your head to find your assigned mentor, who will have the Matter Transportation Device. They’ll brief you on a short excursion, and upon your return, you’ll both Matt back up to the ship.”

Look for clues, for anything out of place, of course. Like the glaringly obvious building

Your hooves squish in the springy turf, and the mountains rise and fall behind the apex of the hill with each bouncing leap. Going directly toward the building would be boring. You’ll go around it first—scouting. That’s right. Totally being responsible. 

A breeze whips past and you pause, your eyes half closing as you filter the new smells and try to guess what they are. Plants. Air. Smoke. Smoke’s a little concerning, but it’s only a whiff, so it’s probably pretty far aw—

Something slams into you, lifting you off your hooves. You skid across the rocky ground on your side. Dust in your eyes makes them water. Your heart hammers faster than it did during your first spacewalk, and you scramble to your hooves. 

Cougar stands a meter away, his fangs a flash of white as he smiles. “Disregarding orders again, Goat?”

What’s he doing out here? You glance at the building, where Cow would be waiting. It’s too far. Cougar will outrun you. 

He prowls a step closer. “This is a training exercise. You and I weren’t supposed to meet like this. If you had followed orders, we wouldn’t have.”

“You wouldn’t hurt me. Not really.” Too bad fear makes your voice high-pitched and bleaty.

“Accidents sometimes happen in training exercises.” He sits, inspecting his claws. 

You flick your tail. You won’t bow to the threats he’s tossing about. You’re the first Goat to make it onto the Whale’s Space Teams. And even if this planet seemed boring at first, it’s your very first alien planet! You’re not about to let the chance to explore end here in the cruel claws of a Cougar bully. 

You dig your small hooves into the ground and lower your head, dropping to all fours. A flicker of surprise lights Cougar’s eyes as you spring forward. You crash horns-first into his side, the same way he’d knocked you over just a few moments ago. Spinning around, you charge for the top of the hill, for safety. Cougar won’t be happy you hit him, but all you have to do is make it to the tiny, square-sided building before he does. 

The soft dirt slows you, giving no easy hoof-holds as you scramble up the hillside. Hot breath on your flanks urges you to move faster, and you skid around the side of the building, panting for air. 

Where’s the door? Where’s the door? Cougar’s gonna get you before you can find the entrance to this dirty, unassuming building, and on your very first mission. That’d be mortifying. 

The door gleams, white metal in the sunlight, and you lunge for it, scrabbling with the knob. It was obviously not made for hoofed-species. He’s coming and you don’t have time to wrestle with a space-junked door! You kick it, then lower your head and head-butt it. 

It lurches open and you stumble inside. Your hooves slow of their own accord. You stare around, gaping. The interior is an enormous cavern. A cool grey banister stands two meters in front of you, separating you from the rest of the colossal space, while ramps of bustling Geckos, Mice, and Tamarins spiral deeper into the mountain beneath you. A Bat whisks past you toward the ceiling, carrying a basket. Everything is lit with warm yellow bulbs, and flashes of colorful doors amidst the shadowy grays accent the interior. This is more like it.

One floor below you, Cow waits, tapping her hoof. “How’d the Goat do?”

Your mouth works, but nothing comes out. Who was she talking to?

Behind you, a velvet voice has no trouble finding words. “Off-script, and with a literal meaning for ‘using your head.’”

 Your eyes flick from Cougar to Cow and back again. This was all a setup?

Cougar grins at you. “What, cat got your tongue?”

“What?” you squeak.  Normally you’re much wittier, you swear.

Cow shakes her head. “I needed to teach you an important lesson before we get to our primary objective.” Her bovine face turns serious. “Never judge a planet by its drop site.” 

Space Cows 3: First CP Round

Wow, this week has been full! I got some great feedback from my CPs though, and am working on my edits on Space Goats!

Both my CPs had great suggestions, and it was a matter of selecting which I could pull off in 1,000 words while keeping the voice I had going!

As usual, I read through the feedback right away and let it sit, though this time life conspired to pull me away for most of the week, so hopefully my subconscious got in some good mulling over!

After compiling the comments I wanted to act on (none of the compliments, though they are so kind and good to know!) into Scrivener, I had a clear plan.

Most of the comments were smaller things, though I also received some great notes about characterization and continuity. I threw out comments that would alter the voice too much or turn things that were reflexive into active things (and vice versa), even though they were great comments as general advice. Melissa had great thoughts on changing line breaks for emphasis, which was cool, and it’s always fun to see where people agree on comments (no one disagreed this time, though that’s also fun!).

I decided to stubbornly keep some things, like my “full with leaves” even though it’s a bit archaic. I like my archaic phrasings, lol. If my next round of CPs also marks it though, I might cave.

I did get caught with muddiness regarding four legs or two, and when the Goat switches and why, so I tried to clear that up. Was the Goat normally on four legs and rose up to nibble the branch, or normally on two legs? Was it the rising up on two legs that was against the Code, or nibbling an alien plant?

The other thing I had to think hard about was the line “Are all planets going to be like this one?”. It is a bit clunky, and it’s not strictly necessary. I didn’t like the ideas I had for smoothing it though, so I considered just cutting it. In the end, that’s exactly what I did.

Figuring out the legs issue was a little more involved, but I found I had some extra room so I was able to give more description of the space and Goat’s reactions to the back and forth.

So with no further ado, here is Space Goats, this time with a word count of 985.

You sproing through the scraggly bushes that cling to the hill, muzzle raised to the cool breeze. Alien scents wash over you, so different from the ship’s sterile, recycled air. The trees are full with leaves, and the sky is blue above the darker bruising of the distant mountains.

It’s rather disappointing. Shouldn’t alien planets be more, well, alien?  

And there’s a blocky, artificial structure right at the top of the hill, not even trying to hide. Training exercises are supposed to be hard, aren’t they? Otherwise what’s the point? It’s all so dreadfully boring, that you stretch your neck out, rising on the tips of your back hooves to reach a long-hanging branch and nibble at the twigs there. It’s against the Code, but who’s gonna tell on you? Cow? Cow’s not here. She’ll be in the building that’s clearly where you’re meant to go, waiting for you to show up for your briefing. 

But you’re on an alien planet! Simmering underneath the disappointment, thrums of energy race through your bones. The grass isn’t made of crystal, and the sky’s not green, but it’s still a completely new ball of rock hurtling through space, and you’ve actually done it. You’re a Space Goat and nothing can take that away from you. 

All you need to complete the day is a nice glass of wine, the fruitier the better. 

Oh, and to finish your mission, you suppose. 

You can hear the Whale as distinctly as you did when he was standing in front of you, a scowl on his long face. “This mission is simple. You’ll be Dropped on an alien planet. First, use your wits to find your assigned mentor, who will have the Matt. They’ll brief you on a short excursion, and upon your return, you’ll both Matt back up to the ship.”

Look for clues, for anything out of place, of course. Like the glaringly obvious building

Your hooves squish in the springy turf, and the mountains rise and fall behind the apex of the hill with each bouncing leap. Going directly toward the building would be boring. You’ll go around it first—scouting. That’s right. Totally being responsible. 

A breeze whips past and you pause, your eyes half closing as you filter the new smells and try to guess what they are. Plants. Air. Smoke. Smoke’s a little concerning, but it’s only a whiff, so it’s probably pretty far aw—

Something slams into you, lifting you off your hooves. You skid across the rocky ground on your side. Dust makes your eyes tear up. Your heart hammers faster than it did during your first spacewalk, and you scramble to your hooves. 

Cougar stands a meter away, his fangs a flash of white as he smiles. “Not following orders again, Goat?”

What’s he doing out here? You glance at the building, where Cow would be waiting. It’s too far. Cougar will outrun you. 

He prowls a step closer. “This is a training exercise. You and I weren’t supposed to meet like this. If you had followed orders, we wouldn’t have.”

“You wouldn’t hurt me. Not really.” Too bad fear makes your voice high-pitched and bleaty.

“Accidents sometimes happen in training exercises.” He sits, inspecting his claws. 

You flick your tail. You won’t cave to the threats he’s tossing about. You’re the first Goat to make it on the Whale’s Space Teams. And even if this planet seemed boring at first, it’s your very first alien planet! You’re not about to let the chance to explore end here in the cruel claws of a Cougar bully. 

You dig your small hooves into the ground and lower your head, dropping to all fours. A flicker of surprise lights Cougar’s eyes as you spring forward. Your horns crash into his side, just as he’d knocked you over just a few moments ago. Spinning around, you charge for the top of the hill, for safety. Cougar won’t be happy you hit him, but all you have to do is make it to the tiny, square-sided building before he does. 

The soft dirt slows you, giving no easy hoof-holds as you scramble up the hillside. Hot breath on your flanks urges you to move faster, and you skid around the side of the building, panting for air. 

Where’s the door? Where’s the door? Cougar’s gonna get you before you can find the door to this dirty, unassuming building, and on your very first mission. That’d be mortifying. 

The door gleams, white metal in the sunlight, and you lunge for it, scrabbling with the knob. It was obviously not made for hoofed-species. Cougar would likely have an easier time with it. He’s coming and you don’t have time to wrestle with a space-junked door! You kick it, then lower your head and head-butt it. 

It lurches open and you stumble inside. Your hooves slow of their own accord. You stare around, gaping. The interior is an enormous cavern. A cool grey banister stands two meters in front of you, separating you from the rest of the colossal space, while ramps of bustling workers spiral deeper into the mountain beneath you. Everything is lit with warm yellow bulbs, and flashes of colorful doors amidst the shadowy grays accent the interior. This is more like it.

One floor below you, Cow waits idly. “How’d the Goat do?”

Your mouth works, but nothing comes out. 

Behind you, a velvet voice has no trouble finding words. “Off-script, and with a literal meaning for ‘using your head.’”

 Your eye flick from Cougar to Cow and back again. This was all a setup?

Cougar grins at you. “What, cat got your tongue?”

“What?” you squeak.  Normally you’re much more witty, you swear.

Cow shakes her head. “I needed to teach you an important lesson before we get to our primary objective.” Her bovine face turns serious. “Never judge a planet by its drop site.”

Space Cows 3: Self-edit

The first thing I did was let it sit. I always let stuff sit before editing. My subconscious is able to work on it that way. For this, obviously, there’s not as much marinating time available. Then I did a read through and made note of what I wanted to change:

  • Really get into and sophisticate Goat’s voice. I don’t want Goat to sound like a kid, while preserving Goat’s excitement, spunk, and sass.
  • I want to make sure there are no pronouns associated with Goat. I want Goat to be able to be anyone who feels like Goat. 
  • I also want to smooth out the whole reason to be here on this planet, as it got a bit muddy while I was discovering it. 
  • See if I can strengthen the arc I have in here. 
  • Then line edits, to make sure everything’s as polished as I can make it. Obviously typos, cutting word count, and tightening sentences. Oh, and read aloud!

Once I had everything as good as I could make it, I ran it through AutoCrit. As usual for me, it found some repetitions and I got to think about alternate ways to say things. I love how this word map summarizes my story so well!

I’m pretty happy with Space Goats right now! It clocks in at 991 according to Scrivener, so I came in comfortably under the word count limit. Have a look:

You sproing through the short bushes that cling to the hill, muzzle raised to the cool breeze. Alien scents wash over you, so much different from the ship’s sterile, recycled air. The trees are full with leaves, and the sky is blue above the darker bruising of the distant mountains. Are all planets going to be like this one? 

Frankly, part of you is disappointed. Shouldn’t alien planets be more, well, alien? For another thing, there’s an odd artificial structure right at the top of the hill, not even trying to hide. Training exercises are supposed to be hard, aren’t they, or what’s the point? It’s all so dreadfully boring, you rise up on your back hooves to reach a long-hanging branch and nibble at the twigs there. It’s against the Code, but who’s gonna tell on you? Cow? Cow’s not here. She’ll be in the building that’s clearly where you’re meant to go, waiting for you to show up for your briefing. 

But you’re on an alien planet! Simmering underneath the disappointment, thrums of energy race through your bones. The grass isn’t made of crystal, and the sky’s not green, but it’s still a completely new ball of rock hurtling through space and you’ve actually done it. You’re a Space Goat and nothing can take that away from you. 

All you need to complete the day is a nice glass of wine, the fruitier the better. 

Oh, also and to finish your mission, you suppose. 

You can hear the Whale as distinctly as you did when he was standing in front of you, his long face scowling in your memory. “This mission is simple. You’ll be Dropped on an alien planet. First, use your wits to find your assigned mentor, who will have the Matt. They’ll brief you on a short excursion, and upon your return, you’ll both Matt back up to the ship.”

Look for clues, for anything out of place, of course. Like the glaringly obvious building

Your hooves squish in the springy turf, and the mountains rise and fall behind the apex of the hill with each bouncing leap. Going directly toward the building would be boring. You’ll go around it first—scouting. That’s right. Totally being responsible. 

A breeze whips past and you pause, your eyes half closing as you filter the new smells and try to guess what they are. Plants. Air. Smoke. Smoke’s a little concerning, but it’s only a whiff, so it’s probably pretty far aw—

Something slams into you, lifting you off your hooves. You skid across the rocky ground on your side. Dust makes your eyes tear up. Your heart hammers faster than it did during your first space walk, and you scramble to your hooves. 

A Cougar stands a meter away, his fangs a flash of white as he smiles. “Not following orders, again, Goat?”

What’s a Cougar doing out here? You glance at the building, where Cow would be waiting. It’s too far. The Cougar will outrun you. 

The Cougar prowls a step closer. “This is a training exercise. You and I weren’t supposed to meet like this. If you had followed orders, we wouldn’t have.”

“You wouldn’t hurt me. Not really.” Too bad fear makes your voice high-pitched and bleaty.

“Accidents sometimes happen in training exercises.” He sits, inspecting his claws. 

You flick your tail. You won’t cave to the threats he’s tossing about. You’re the first Goat to make it on the Whale’s Space Teams. And even if this planet seemed boring at first, it’s your very first alien planet! You’re not about to let the chance to explore end here in the cruel claws of a Cougar bully. 

You dig your small hooves into the ground and lower your head. A flicker of surprise lights the Cougar’s eyes as you spring forward. Your horns crash into his side, just as he’d knocked you over just a few moments ago. Spinning around, you charge for the top of the hill, for safety. The Cougar won’t be happy you hit him, but all you have to do is make it to the tiny, square-sided building before he does. 

The soft dirt slows you, giving no easy hoof-holds as you scramble up the hillside. Hot breath on your flanks urges you to move faster, so you abandon decorum and go to all fours. Twice as many hooves to propel you to the hilltop does wonders, and you skid around the side of the building, panting for air. 

Where’s the door? Where’s the door? The Cougar’s gonna get you before you can find the door to this dirty, unassuming building, and on your very first mission. That’d be mortifying. 

The door gleams, white metal in the sunlight, and you lunge for it, scrabbling with the knob. It was obviously not made for hoofed-species. Ironically, Cougar would likely have an easier time with it. He’s coming and you don’t have time to wrestle with a space-junked door! You kick it, then lower your head and head-butt it. 

It springs open and you stumble inside. Your hooves slow of their own accord. You stare around yourself, gaping. A cool grey banister stands two meters in front of you, separating you from the rest of the colossal space. An enormous cavern of bustling workers spirals deeper into the mountain beneath you. Everything is lit with warm yellow bulbs, and flashes of colorful doors accent the interior. This is more like it.

One floor below you, Cow waits idly. “How’d the Goat do?”

Your mouth works, but nothing comes out. 

Behind you, a velvet voice has no trouble finding words. “Off-script, and with a literal meaning for ‘using your head.’” 

Cougar grins at you. “What, cat got your tongue?”

“What?” you squeak. 

Cow shakes her head. “I needed to teach you an important lesson before we get to our primary objective.” Her bovine face turns serious. “Never judge a planet by its drop site.”

Writer In Motion: Space Cows 3: The First Draft

You sproing through the short bushes that cling to the grassy hill, muzzle raised to the cool air. Odd scents wash over you—this planet sure is stinky! The trees are full with leaves, and the sky is blue, lighter than the grey-blue of the distant mountains. Are all planets going to be like this one? 

Frankly, part of you is disappointed. Aren’t alien plantes supposed to be more, well, alien? For another thing, there’s a odd artificial structure right at the top of the hill, clearly not even trying to hide. Training exercises are supposed to be hard, aren’t they, or what’s the point? It’s all so dreadfully boring, you rise up on your back hooves to reach a long-hanging branch and nibble at the twigs there. It’s against the Code, but who’s donna tell on you? Cow? It’s not like Cow’s every here. They’d be in the building that’s clearly where you’re meant to go, waiting for you to show up for your briefing. 

But you’re on an alien planet! It should be even more exciting, but still thrums of energy race through your bones, simmering beneath the vague disappointment. The grass isn’t made of crystal and the sky’s not green, but it’s still a completely new ball of rock hurtling through space and you’ve actually done it. You’re a Space Goat and nothing can take that away form you. 

All you need to complete the day is a nice glass of wine, the fruitier the better. 

Oh, also and to complete your mission, you suppose. 

You can hear the Whale as clearly as you did when he was standing in front of you, his long face scowling in your memory. “This mission is simple. You’ll be Dropped on an alien planet and will have to find your assigned rendezvous partner, who will have the Matt. Once you find your partner, you’ll be briefed on a short mission, and upon your return, Matt back up to the ship.”

Look for clues, for anything out of place, obviously. Like the glaringly obvious building

You sproing along, your hooves squishing in springy turf. The mountains rise and fall behind the hill with each bouncing leap. Going directly toward the building would be boring. You’ll go around it first—scouting. That’s right. Totally being responsible. 

The wind brings you further brand new scents, and you pause, your eyes half closing as you filter the new smells out and try to guess what they are. Plants. Air. Smoke. Smoke’s a little concerning, but it’s only a little bit, so it’s probably pretty far aw—

Something slams into you, lifting you off your hooves. You skid across the rocky ground on your side, dust making your eyes tear up. Your heart beats faster than it did during your first space walk, and you scramble to your hooves. Before you stands a Cougar, fangs a flash of white as he smiles at you. 

“Not following orders, again, Goat?” he asks. 

What was a Cougar doing out here? You glance at the building, so obviously where Cow would be waiting. It was too far. The Cougar would outrun you. 

Another flash of white as the Cougar smiles again. “It’s supposed to be a training exercise. You and I weren’t supposed to meet like this. If you’d followed orders, we wouldn’t have.”

“You wouldn’t hurt me. Not really.” Too bad fear makes your voice high-pitched and bleaty.

“Accidents sometimes happen in training exercises,” he responds, inspecting his claws. 

You’re not about to cave to the threats he’s tossing about like the trees shedding pollen in the air. You’re the first Goat to make it on the Whale’s Space Teams. And even if this planet seemed boring at first, it was the very first alien planet you’ve been on and you’re not about to lt the chance to explore more end here in the cruel claws of a Cougar bully. 

You dig your small hooves into the arid ground and lower your head. A flicker of surprise lights the Cougar’s eyes, but then you spring forward. Your horns crash into his side just as he’d knocked you over just a few moments ago. And then, you spin and charge for the building, for safety. The Cougar won’t be happy you hit him, but all you have to do is make it to the tiny, square-sided building before he does. 

The soft dirt slows you, giving no easy platform as you scramble up the hillside. Hot breath on your flanks motivates you to move faster, so you abandon decorum and go to all fours. Twice as many hooves to propel you to the top of the hill does wonders, and you skid around the side of the building, panting for breath. Where’s the door? Where’s the door? The Cougar’s gonna get you before you can find the door to this dirty, unassuming, tiny building, and on your very first mission. That’d be embarrassing. 

The door gleams, white metal in the sunlight, and you lunge for it, scrabbling with the knob. It was clearly not made for hooved-species. Ironically, Cougar would likely have an easier time with it, but you don’t have time to wrestle with a space junked door! You kick it, and then lower your head and head-butt it. 

It springs open, and you stumble inside. Your hooves slow of their own accord, leaving you gaping. A cool grey banister stands one meter in front of you, separating you from the rest of the colossal space. An enormous cavern of bustling workers spirals below you, along with Cow, waiting just one floor down. Everything is lit with warm yellow bulbs, and flashes of colorful doors accent the space. 

“How’d the Goat do?” the Cow asks. 

Your mouth works, but nothing comes out. 

Behind you, someone else has no trouble finding words. “Off-script, and with a literal meaning for “using your head”.” 

He grins at you. “What, cat got your tongue?”

“What?” you squeak. 

Cow smiles. “I needed to teach you an important lesson before we get to our primary objective.” The bovine face turns serious, brown eyes boring into you. “Never judge a planet by its drop site.”


Coming in at 1031 words, it’s rough, but I love it. I’m really excited to dig deeper into Goat and let their snark and attitude out further, even though I need to trim some words!

I definitely wanted to do something fresh, to turn it on its head a bit, so using a new point of view and vaguely recognizable situations, then flipping it on its head felt like the right move to me. Plus, Goat’s voice was just so spunky and kept me laughing internally. 

I forgot my terminology so had to look it up. And that delete button kept calling for little typos, but I tried to avoid it, as I do normally fast draft. This draft was a lot slower than many of my drafts have been, but I have slowed down a little this year (last year my fingers were on fire I was drafting so fast!). Autocorrect still caught some of my typos while others I’m hoping I can figure out later!

The last words just popped into my head, and I rushed to write them down right away, because I felt they were a perfect end to my story, giving me the anchor to tie together the vague shape of the story that had come to mind. Don’t judge a planet by its drop site.